Pretty corny, although it was interesting to watch. If you have some better writing, use a tripod and better photographs, you can improve your stop motions a great deal. You have talent, but you need to work on your animations, and get the bugs out of the way first.
Thanks for your honest input. I'll take what you said into consideration when I make my next animation.
Not terrible, this was a pretty average animation. My biggest complaint was the sound effects, you only had about 3 or 4 sound effects which you used repeatedly, use more variety, or use them less. Also, no background music. This could have been more effective if you spent more time looking at the sound in your film. Other than that, this is fairly well done.
Not that creative, as you took te whole idea from another video. The animation wasn't that great, and this really should be rated Mature. Overall, not really that great.
Yes, I KNOW that its idea came from another video. I KNOW this should be rated mature. But for some reason, Newgrounds didn't make it that way.
Really catchy song, the animation isn't that great so I can only give this a 4.5! You have no problem with music creation, you should focus more on your animation skills. The person didn't look realistic enough, the candy seemed more lifelike. Fix this and you can get 5's on all of your animations.
Not That Funny...
This wasn't that funny, I don't see why everyone is giving this a 10.
Jokes about mushrooms in Mario being drugs are far overused, and the animation didn't have much besides this old joke. Animation and voice-acting was average.
I love you too mah friend!
Fabulous animation! I find it hard to believe this is your first animation short! You have a lot of talent as an animator and as an artist. Everything moved together smoothly, and you had music and sound to match you movie well. Keep up the good work! =3
Funny. Catchy song too!
Great video! It is a little short though...
Btw, what song did you use for the background music?
the song is called "Help me Erin" by Coolandcreate
it's really popular in japan
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